Pele's Playground Forum Index
The Playground | FAQ | Memberlist | Profile | Usergroups | Search | Log in | Register


Writing progress
Post new topic    Pele's Playground Forum Index » General Forum Flat
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author Message
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Writing progress    Posted: December 09 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

9/9/2008: 3318 words on a BtVS short story. I'm not really happy with it, though. I may not bother to post it. On the other hand, it's 3300 words.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
Subject Author Date/Time
Writing progress dstar December 09 2008
   Re: Writing progress dstar December 09 2008
      Re: Writing progress The Wanderer December 10 2008
      Re: Writing progress The Wanderer December 10 2008
         Re: Writing progress awkward42 December 10 2008
            Re: Writing progress dstar December 10 2008
   Re: Writing progress dstar December 13 2008
   Re: Writing progress dstar December 14 2008
      Re: Writing progress Steveh111 December 15 2008
   Re: Writing progress dstar December 20 2008
      Re: Writing progress Skorpio December 21 2008
      Re: Writing progress newjerseybadger December 23 2008
         Re: Writing progress dstar December 26 2008
            Re: Writing progress awkward42 December 27 2008
               Re: Writing progress awkward42 January 19 2009
                  Re: Writing progress dstar January 24 2009
                     Re: Writing progress ronp January 25 2009
   Re: Writing progress dstar August 04 2009
   Re: Writing progress dstar August 05 2009
   Re: Writing progress dstar August 06 2009
      Re: Writing progress Steveh111 August 10 2009
         Re: Writing progress dstar August 11 2009
   Re: Writing progress dstar August 13 2009
      Re: Writing progress awkward42 August 21 2009
         Re: Writing progress dstar August 21 2009
            Re: Writing progress awkward42 August 22 2009
               Re: Writing progress Steveh111 August 24 2009
                  Re: Writing progress awkward42 September 01 2009
                     Re: Writing progress Steveh111 September 03 2009
                        Re: Writing progress ancient September 03 2009
                           Re: Writing progress Steveh111 September 04 2009
                           Re: Writing progress dstar September 04 2009
                              Re: Writing progress awkward42 September 17 2009
                                 Re: Writing progress Steveh111 September 18 2009
                                    Re: Writing progress dstar September 19 2009
                                       Re: Writing progress ronp September 21 2009
                                          Re: Writing progress ronp September 28 2009
                                       Re: Writing progress dstar September 28 2009
                                          Re: Writing progress ancient September 28 2009
                                          Re: Writing progress The Wanderer September 29 2009
                                             Re: Writing progress awkward42 October 15 2009
                                                Re: Writing progress dstar October 17 2009
                                                   Re: Writing progress ronp October 18 2009
                                                   Re: Writing progress The Wanderer October 22 2009
                                                      Re: Writing progress ronp October 26 2009
                                                         Re: Writing progress awkward42 October 27 2009
                                                            Re: Writing progress Steveh111 October 31 2009
                                                      Re: Writing progress dstar November 11 2009
                                                         Re: Writing progress shades98 November 24 2009
                                                            Re: Writing progress dstar December 01 2009
                                                               Re: Writing progress ronp December 11 2009
                                                                  Re: Writing progress dstar December 12 2009
                                                                     Re: Writing progress ronp December 12 2009
                                                                     Re: Writing progress The Wanderer December 15 2009
                                                                        Re: Writing progress ancient December 21 2009
                                                                           Re: Writing progress ronp December 27 2009
                                                                              Re: Writing progress dstar December 29 2009
                                                                                 Re: Writing progress ronp December 31 2009
                                                               Re: Writing progress The Wanderer January 11 2010
                                                                  Re: Writing progress Ulrich January 11 2010
                                                                     Re: Writing progress dstar January 13 2010
                                                                        Re: Writing progress awkward42 May 13 2010
                                                                           Re: Writing progress dstar May 17 2010
                                                                              Re: Writing progress ancient May 17 2010
                                                                                 Re: Writing progress awkward42 May 27 2010
                                                                                    Re: Writing progress awkward42 June 04 2010
                                                                                       Re: Writing progress dstar June 04 2010
                                                                                          Re: Writing progress awkward42 June 04 2010
                                                                  Re: Writing progress dstar January 13 2010
   Re: Writing progress dstar June 06 2010
      Re: Writing progress awkward42 June 08 2010
         Re: Writing progress ronp June 09 2010
            Re: Writing progress awkward42 June 10 2010
               Re: Writing progress ronp June 10 2010
               Re: Writing progress The Wanderer June 10 2010
                  Re: Writing progress awkward42 June 10 2010
                     Re: Writing progress Steveh111 June 13 2010
                        Re: Writing progress awkward42 June 18 2010
                           Re: Writing progress ronp June 22 2010
                              Re: Writing progress dstar June 23 2010
                                 Re: Writing progress dstar June 29 2010
                                    Re: Writing progress ronp June 29 2010
                                       Re: Writing progress awkward42 July 16 2010
                                          Re: Writing progress dstar July 20 2010
                                             Re: Writing progress The Wanderer July 20 2010
                                                Re: Writing progress dstar July 20 2010
                                                   Re: Writing progress The Wanderer July 20 2010
                                                      Re: Writing progress awkward42 July 20 2010
                                                         Re: Writing progress dstar July 20 2010
                                                      Re: Writing progress dstar July 20 2010
Author Message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 09 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

What the heck. I up it up for the betas; if they can help me turn it into something decent I'll release it.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
The Wanderer



Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 93
Location: Maryland

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 10 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

I see the link on the front page, but when I try to look at the story itself I get "could not find server". Is it just that the DNS update hasn't propagated yet? Is there any other way of getting at the story in the meantime?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
 
The Wanderer



Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 93
Location: Maryland

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 10 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

I added the IP and hostname to my local hosts file, and it seems to have loaded fine. Hopefully it'll propagate correctly later and I can remove that entry. Sorry for the noise.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 10 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

The Wanderer wrote:
I added the IP and hostname to my local hosts file, and it seems to have loaded fine. Hopefully it'll propagate correctly later and I can remove that entry. Sorry for the noise.


I can't see it either and don't know how to do what The Wanderer has done.
I'm using Linux (Kubuntu 8.04) if anybody can teach me.

edIt 1:
Actually, changes must have propogated as I can see it now.

edit 2:
It was working, but now it isn't again. Any ideas?

_________________
SignaturePips / Projects
The essential things in life are seen not with the eyes, but with the heart
-Antoine de St Exupery


Last edited by awkward42 on December 10 2008; edited 2 times in total
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 10 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

awkward42 wrote:
The Wanderer wrote:
I added the IP and hostname to my local hosts file, and it seems to have loaded fine. Hopefully it'll propagate correctly later and I can remove that entry. Sorry for the noise.


I can't see it either and don't know how to do what The Wanderer has done.
I'm using Linux (Kubuntu 8.04) if anybody can teach me.

edIt 1:
Actually, changes must have propogated as I can see it now.

edit 2:
It was working, but now it isn't again. Any ideas?


Yup, fixed -- I forgot to update the serial # on the zone file when I added the new hostname, so anything that had the old one cached wouldn't have picked it up.

In the Merb-based rewrite of the software, I'm trying to get away from using the hostnames for just that reason (although I'm keeping them for compatibility).
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 13 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

9/12/2008-12/12/2008: 0 words. Wednesday I don't really have an excuse for, but Thursday I was out shopping, and thursday night and yesterday I was working on getting my christmas present set up. Mmm, 17" laptop. Ewwww, Vista.

Today, however, I do plan to get some writing done.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 14 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

13-12-2008: 0 words
14-12-2008: 3000 words (2900 according to Emacs, 3100 according to the site) on Whore of Slytherin. Note to self: when putting something like 'more of Dumbledore's manipulations are revealed' in notes, _INCLUDE WHAT THEY ARE_! Hopefully it wasn't important. That, or that I'll remember before I release the chapter....
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
Steveh111



Joined: 20 Feb 2006
Posts: 184

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 15 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Oh no! He's doing it! Now I'll have to follow through on my promise to follow suit...

_________________
SignaturePips / Projects
'Nature always obeys Her own Laws' - Leonardo da Vinci
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website AIM Address Yahoo Messenger
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 20 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

12/15 - 12/20: 0 words. I've had to Go Out And Do Stuff every day except Monday, including Wednesday and Thursday when I was running a 3-degree fever. Sad Won't be getting anything done today either, most likely, as we're heading down to Vel's parents' place later.

On the upside, I've got my main christmas present (new laptop! Toshiba Satellite L355D-S7829! Wheeeeee!) _AND_.... a potential job. If it happens, I'll be driving the same route I did before, pulling into the same parking space, walking into the same building, and (possibly) sitting at the same desk. My former employer is looking to buy some equipment, and part of the deal is that they'll have someone on site for a year -- and they've asked that that someone be me.

I had a _good_ boss. I suspect that this is him trying to make sure I'm still available in a year or so when he manages to talk them into hiring him....
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
Skorpio



Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 51
Location: Birmingham

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 21 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

dstar wrote:
My former employer is looking to buy some equipment, and part of the deal is that they'll have someone on site for a year -- and they've asked that that someone be me.

I had a _good_ boss. I suspect that this is him trying to make sure I'm still available in a year or so when he manages to talk them into hiring him....


That's good news,good luck with that.

Mike
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
newjerseybadger



Joined: 01 Jan 2006
Posts: 61
Location: Phillipsburg, NJ

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 23 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

dstar wrote:
..._AND_.... a potential job. If it happens, I'll be driving the same route I did before, pulling into the same parking space, walking into the same building, and (possibly) sitting at the same desk. My former employer is looking to buy some equipment, and part of the deal is that they'll have someone on site for a year -- and they've asked that that someone be me.

I had a _good_ boss. I suspect that this is him trying to make sure I'm still available in a year or so when he manages to talk them into hiring him....


Does this mean you'll still get paid your severance package/salary continuation? (...He said, crossing his fingers for you)

And in unrelated news I've reread all of your stuff so often I've got it half memorized. More, please.
--Phil

_________________
SignaturePips / Projects
(\ /) 
(O.o) Copy the bunny to your signature to help him achieve world domination,
(>"<) and come join the dark side. (They have cookies.)
/_|_\
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 26 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Yup, I would, which would be _great_.

In other news, no writing this week -- I fought the Vista, and the Vista won.

On a _completely_ unrelated note, I'm typing this on my laptop, which is running Ubuntu Linux. It took me roughly the same amount of time to get it working the way I wanted -- the difference was that I'm at my in-laws, and have a net connection that's less than stable. If you exclude the time I spent waiting on things to download and redownloading things because the connection dropped, I spent maybe a day customizing it.

The _install_ took less time than it took Vista to go through its first-time customization... and I was able to surf the web, etc, while I did it.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 27 2008 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

continuing the off-topic thread, I've been using (k)ubuntu linux for a couple of years now.
Although I'm not impressed with the latest version of KDE desktop, I much prefer linux.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: January 19 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

How has 2009 been productivity wise?
Also, there has been no update of the news on the main page since the 5th of October, so you may want to pen a few words for there.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: January 24 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

awkward42 wrote:
How has 2009 been productivity wise?
Also, there has been no update of the news on the main page since the 5th of October, so you may want to pen a few words for there.


Not great as far as writing, but really good as far as working on the upgrade to the site.

And I thought I'd put something up on the main page just a couple of weeks ago! Yeek!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: January 25 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Thanks for the update. I was wondering who was still around.

Sorry about the rough year.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: August 04 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Okay, really doing the progress reports starting today:

Biking: 1.27mi., 7m.

Writing: 1800 words on Sonuachara chapter 14; chapter posted for betas. Cut it a little early, because I wouldn't have had time to finish the next scene today if I'd kept going, and I promised it would go up today.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: August 05 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

1.5 miles, 8 minutes. 800 words -- I had to stop early because my fingers were aching too much to type (from holding the handlebars on the bike -- that'll go away in a week or so).
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: August 06 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Today: 0 miles, 0 words. Woke up with a nasty[*] headache threatening, so rather than risk incapacitating myself I didn't do anything this morning. I appear to have pinched a nerve in my neck, which was probably the trigger.

[*] Possibly a migraine, possibly not -- I've never been sure. On the one hand, I don't have the classic auras; on the other, they're certainly severe enough to qualify, and not all migraine sufferers get the auras (ISTR it's either 30% do, or 30% don't). On the gripping hand, they appear to be tension related. On the *other* gripping hand, they could be migraines triggered by the tension, sooo... all I know is that if I take care of them before they really hit, I'm more or less okay, but if I let them get bad I end up in bed in enough pain to make me nauseated.

Which, now that I think about it, argues for them being migraines.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
Steveh111



Joined: 20 Feb 2006
Posts: 184

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: August 10 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

dstar wrote:
On the *other* gripping hand...
Okay, so now we have *positively* identified Shalon as a Watchmaker. I wonder if Vel's a Mediator or an Engineer?


Sorry to hear you've been suffering again, Shay.


Steve.


Last edited by Steveh111 on August 10 2009; edited 1 time in total
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website AIM Address Yahoo Messenger
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: August 11 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Steveh111 wrote:
dstar wrote:
On the *other* gripping hand...
Okay, so now we have *positively* identified Shalon as a Watchmaker. I wonder if Vel's a Mediator or an Engineer?


Sorry to hear you've been suffering again, Shay.


Steve.


Razz

Looks like I forgot to post my progress for Friday -- 1.75 miles, negligible words (my fingers weren't hurting too much to type, but I could not type *accurately*... by the time I got done, I'd probably typed several times the number of words I ended up with.)

Today: 2.4 miles (!), words... don't know yet. Smile

Yesterday: spent the morning figuring out how to deal with the roofing company that altered the date on a post-dated check which they were holding for security until the check from the insurance company arrived.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: August 13 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Yesterday: no exercise or writing, as I had to be in the office by 8.

Today: exercise will be finishing mowing the yard. 800 words on Jason and Kylie.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: August 21 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

What calamity has befallen Shay that progress updates have ceased while I've been sunning myself err, dodging rain showers in Northumberland for a week?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: August 21 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Bleh.

Let's see... Monday I slept in, trying to catch up a bit on the sleep I missed over the weekend and Sunday night. Tuesday I did the same, because I couldn't get to sleep at a reasonable hour Monday night. Wednesday and yesterday I had to be in early for training (lots of training -- 9+ hours), and last night I didn't get to bed until late after having to replace the matress in the waterbed, so I slept in (and ended up taking today as a sick day, because I did something to my back while messing with the bed).

On top of that, Vel's iguana died Tuesday, and my laptop just died. Well, sort of -- if I had a way to charge the battery, I could keep using it; it's the socket for the AC power cord that died. Luckily it's still under warranty.

The repair place I called said probably 3-5 business days, so probably no writing next week. Sad

Shalon Wood
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: August 22 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Thanks for the update, but are you sure you're living your own life and haven't somehow become switched with a character in a soap opera? Very Happy Wink
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
Steveh111



Joined: 20 Feb 2006
Posts: 184

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: August 24 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Shay and Vel's autobiographies would make pretty compelling reading. I'm guessing there's no way they could film them though...
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website AIM Address Yahoo Messenger
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 01 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Any progress on anything since the 21st?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
Steveh111



Joined: 20 Feb 2006
Posts: 184

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 03 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

I spoke with Shay last night: the replacement part for his laptop is out of stock - so we're out of luck, for the moment at least. He's looking into 'alternative solutions'... Wink
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website AIM Address Yahoo Messenger
 
ancient



Joined: 22 Jul 2006
Posts: 18

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 03 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

I propose we get together and send Shay a gift certificate for a new laptop... is there a Micro Center near enough to be useful? It might save us all some gray hairs Wink

On the other tentacle, the continuing problems with computers may have something to do with ethereal exhalations from the stories. Perhaps a competent mage should put Castegor's Unending Electrical Integrity on the poor machine(s) before they fragment into extradimensional chaos.


Last edited by ancient on September 03 2009; edited 1 time in total
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
Steveh111



Joined: 20 Feb 2006
Posts: 184

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 04 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Competent!!! You DO know that's a level 20 spell, don't you????

Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Laughing
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website AIM Address Yahoo Messenger
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 04 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Heh.

Actually, one of the projects on my list this weekend is to get things set up so I have a way to write. Getting the pool up and running so that Vel can use it (now that we *finally* have the new liner) takes precedence, though.

Shalon Wood
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 17 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

What dramas has the past fortnight brought to your lives then? Confused Wink

(note this is not meant to sound at all sarcastic)
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
Steveh111



Joined: 20 Feb 2006
Posts: 184

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 18 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Chuckle. You're liable to get growled at: Shay's going to have a lot of frustration to 'write out' once he gets his laptop working again.

Yes, the part is STILL on backorder. (As of Wednesday, anyway.)

Steve.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website AIM Address Yahoo Messenger
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 19 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Oh, it's better than that. The part is on backorder -- with no ETA. I jumped on the guy a little, but apparently this is an amazingly common failure mode, because they have several of that model with the same problem. I'm hoping that the fact that there's no ETA means that Toshiba redesigned the bottom case assembly to prevent it.

Tuesday I took my car in (which we have now got running for the first time in 2+ years) to get the brakes done. Needed new rotors, to the tune of $300.

Vel's new power supply came in this week... and yesterday appeared to die. It hadn't, however; it looks like it was her $80 Razor mouse died in such a way that it causes any computer it's plugged into to power off. That was good to know (although we won't be buying any more Razor mice), but now it won't start up (my guess, although I haven't had a chance to look at it, is that one of the video cards needs reseating).

And Jaime's laptop appears to be dead -- one long beep, two short ones, which (as far as I can tell) means a video problem. I just spent a couple of hours figuring out how to take it apart in hopes that the video was on a daughterboard which needed reseating, but no luck.

On the upside, the pool is fixed. And I'm not on call at work this week (and believe me, I'm grateful -- it's not been a good week to be the on call person. When you consider that I spent almost six hours last weekend handling problems, and it's looking like I got lucky, wel....).

Still. Frustration is. Screaming may be as well. At least I can (hopefully) get started biking again next week. Barring disasters.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 21 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

So, everything is back to normal....
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 28 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

ronp wrote:
So, everything is back to normal....
No replies are normal.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 28 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

This is getting ridiculous. Now it looks like Jaime's motherboard has died. And the part for my laptop is *STILL* backordered with no ETA.

The upside is that we've got vel's desktop working. So tomorrow I'm starting back on my hour a day of writing.

Assuming it doesn't catch on fire or something, of course.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
ancient



Joined: 22 Jul 2006
Posts: 18

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 28 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

dstar wrote:
So tomorrow I'm starting back on my hour a day of writing.

Assuming it doesn't catch on fire or something, of course.


Are you sure nobody has stolen the copper out of the psychic grounding system? Sounds like aethereal leakage to me!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
The Wanderer



Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 93
Location: Maryland

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: September 29 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

dstar wrote:
This is getting ridiculous.

"Getting"?

I've had some runs of bad luck in my time, but I'm starting to wonder if something out there doesn't have it in for you two. Good thoughts your way...
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: October 15 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

How goes the life, times and tribulations of Shay and Vel?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: October 17 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

awkward42 wrote:
How goes the life, times and tribulations of Shay and Vel?


MUCH better!

I can has laptop! There's about an 80% chance that I'll have something up for beta tomorrow (the uncertainty is in whether the work I need to do on the van and on Pele will keep me from finishing it up).

And speaking of tribulations, some of you may have noticed that Pele has been down erratically. This is because the cpu fan is dying, and every so often it overheats and shuts itself off. Currently I have a fan blowing in.

You know, I was *JOKING* when I made that comment about things catching on fire....
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: October 18 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

dstar wrote:
You know, I was *JOKING* when I made that comment about things catching on fire....


You of all people should know better than to tease/tempt fate.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
The Wanderer



Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 93
Location: Maryland

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: October 22 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

dstar wrote:
There's about an 80% chance that I'll have something up for beta tomorrow (the uncertainty is in whether the work I need to do on the van and on Pele will keep me from finishing it up).

I take it that the 20% chance kicked in, here?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: October 26 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

The Wanderer wrote:

I take it that the 20% chance kicked in, here?


You really expected wok?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: October 27 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

ronp wrote:
You really expected wok?


Of things I've expected of Shay and Vel, them cooking me a Chinese meal is not one of them (not that I'd object Wink )
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
Steveh111



Joined: 20 Feb 2006
Posts: 184

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: October 31 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

They can't catch a break - the latest is that Vel's sprained her ankle - in the bath!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website AIM Address Yahoo Messenger
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: November 11 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

What the heck? It never notified me that there were new messages (except for the one I just got)...

Quick update, as I'm at work: I'll have an update out this week, probably Friday. I screwed up my wrists and ended up having to avoid typing as much as possible (no small trick when you're a programmer....)
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
shades98



Joined: 03 Jan 2006
Posts: 30

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: November 24 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

I hope that things are getting better for both of you. You are both in my thoughts and hopes.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Yahoo Messenger MSN Messenger
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 01 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

I saw this message when you posted it, but I initially waited to answer (as we'd just discovered something), and then... the internet access at Vel's parents was, ah, flaky. I didn't know you could keep a link up with 20 second+ round trip times...

Vel is definitely getting better -- we got the results of her blood tests last monday, and her Vitamin D levels were... catastrophically low. Normal is 35-55, and a couple of years ago her doctor discovered hers were at 14, leading to her taking 2,000 units every day. It was the lowest her doctor had ever seen (although since then one of the nurses in the office had a level of *7* -- remember that; it'll be important later).

Vel's levels were at *9*, so in addition to the 2,000 units per day, she's taking 50,000 units per week (and her dr had her take 50,000 units *twice* last week). And she got off lucky -- the nurse I mentioned? *She* got put in the hospital getting IV doses until her levels were back up. It's probably a good thing Vel's appointment wasn't any later....

I hope to be doing much better after my doctor's appointment tomorrow, where I hope to get something for this sinus infection that's *killing* me (my right ear has been completely stopped up since july or august, despite taking decongestants and using a steroidal nasal spray, and on the drive to Vel's parents this weekend going over overpasses made my ears hurt and pop....). Once I've got something for it and I'm no longer frickin' exhausted all the time, I'll be able to finish up the chapter I have almost done. I was going to try to do it over the weekend, but between the headache and working on the van (AAAAARGH)... well, aside from thanksgiving dinner and working on the van, I pretty much stayed in bed. Part of the time with the lights out. I went to work yesterday, got almost nothing done, and called in sick (not even just working from home) today; I think that's the second time I've done that in three years.

I figure a round of anti-biotics will have me feeling much better shortly, though. It should, anyway.... and I've only got an hour or less to do to get that chapter finished. I want to get it done, at least one more done, and then there's a couple of short stories I want to knock out....
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 11 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Let me guess, Vwl got sick and the computer died....
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 12 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

ronp wrote:
Let me guess, Vwl got sick and the computer died....


You think you're joking, don't you?

First, the power supply for her laptop died. We have one ordered, but it was coming via UPS ground... from Oregon. You can guess how far it actually moved this week, given the storm.

Second, C: on her desktop died. Complete loss. Luckily everything important was backed up elsewhere, but....

Third, I saw my doctor. I've apparently developed allergic asthma, which explains why I've felt so crappy... my resting breathing ability (well, "ability to breath while sitting at your desk, talking on the telephone, and so on" were his exact words) was down 'at least 20 percent', and "ability to push a lawn mower, etc" was down 'at least 40 percent'. He gave me an inhaler and put me on half a dozen meds to get me back to normal, which seem to be helping, slowly.

And finally... I'm the healthiest person in the house. My daughter brought home a stomach bug from school that's hit just about everyone else. Vel didn't *eat* for three days (well, she tried a couple of times, but it didn't work....). I'm starting to think that the school has this big tank labeled "Great Big Tank O' Germs" that they dip the kids in before letting them come home....

There *will* be an update up for beta by the end of tomorrow, however, even if I write it while hallucinating and running a 105 degree fever.

....You know, given past history, maybe I should have said 'Even if I write it while driving down to Austin to claim a giant lottery win'?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 12 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Yikes. But I wasn't joking. I just know you and your household.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
The Wanderer



Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 93
Location: Maryland

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 15 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

I'm almost hesitant to ask what happened this time...

(Also, isn't it past time to start a new thread? This one has gotten kind of out of hand, largely because the "ping?" posts keep coming at the bottom of the hierarchy instead of as replies to the first post.)
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
 
ancient



Joined: 22 Jul 2006
Posts: 18

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 21 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Best wishes to all on the solstice and a happy new year! (I think most of us need that, too...) Good luck, good health, and good friends for good cheer!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 27 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Guess I need to break out the life support systems again.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 29 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

ronp wrote:
Guess I need to break out the life support systems again.


Jason and Kylie 21 just went up for beta.

I've learned that 12-hour pills that knock you out eat into your free time. You might be _awake_, but you aren't getting anything done.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: December 31 2009 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

1) YAY!!!

2) I could have told you that.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
The Wanderer



Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 93
Location: Maryland

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: January 11 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

dstar wrote:
Vel is definitely getting better -- we got the results of her blood tests last monday, and her Vitamin D levels were... catastrophically low. Normal is 35-55, and a couple of years ago her doctor discovered hers were at 14, leading to her taking 2,000 units every day. It was the lowest her doctor had ever seen (although since then one of the nurses in the office had a level of *7* -- remember that; it'll be important later).

Vel's levels were at *9*, so in addition to the 2,000 units per day, she's taking 50,000 units per week (and her dr had her take 50,000 units *twice* last week).

This has been niggling at me off and on since it was posted. If her levels were that low despite taking 2,000 units a day, is it possible that she has some kind of difficulty in uptake - that what she's taking isn't being absorbed or processed properly, for some reason?

Because if that's the case, then I wouldn't necessarily expect taking the additional supplements to help; I wouldn't even be surprised if oversaturation could actually make the root problem worse.

I'm hoping that I'm wrong, that the extra supplements are the needed fix and that things are getting better (all else being equal, which in your lives it rarely seems to be); it's been far too long since we've heard one word from her, and I'd like to have her able to be back around here again.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
 
Ulrich



Joined: 11 Jan 2010
Posts: 1

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: January 11 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

I wounder if the doctor mentioned that you need to be exposed to sunlight to process Vitamin D. Otherwise it isn't converted into a use able form.

U


Last edited by Ulrich on January 11 2010; edited 1 time in total
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: January 13 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Ulrich wrote:
I wounder if the doctor mentioned that you need to be exposed to sunlight to process Vitamin D. Otherwise it isn't converted into a use able form.

U


Oh yeah, having had snakes and lizards we're well aware of that. Unfortunately, she has to avoid too much sunlight or she breaks out in a rash. So now she's got a 24" UV bulb (the kind you use for reptiles) over her spot downstairs....
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: May 13 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

How is the writing been going in the fortnight or so since we last had an update?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: May 17 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

awkward42 wrote:
How is the writing been going in the fortnight or so since we last had an update?


It pretty much *hasn't*. I got 3600 words or so on the 30th, trying to get down enough of a starter for a story that I wouldn't lose it, and around 900 yesterday on something else. That's it.

The last two weeks have been absurd -- the first weekend, I had a headache worse than I've had in a couple of years, so saturday was a complete writeoff, and then that sunday I made the mistake of upgrading the os on my laptop, only to discover that they broke wireless for anything using the chipset in my adapter.

This last week I was on call at work (and up until 3:30am wednesday night/thursday morning), plus working my butt off trying to get some things working. Plus having a sinus headache from Wednesday afternoon up until yesterday morning.

I'm looking forward to a *calm* week... please?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
ancient



Joined: 22 Jul 2006
Posts: 18

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: May 17 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Shay & Vel - your medical problems are distressing!

Just a thought - if you've already considered mold problems, sorry to intrude.

Your problems sound very much like those of a friend. His house is totally infested with mold. It has an unventilated earth-floored crawl space which exudes a stench of mold. The garage is full of woodpecker holes, water gets into the basement when it rains heavily, and there are suspicious water marks on the ceiling. He has perpetual sinus infections, headaches, etc. Recently he had to take care of his GF for two weeks in her 3rd floor apartment in a brick building. Funny, that - he didn't have any symptoms until he moved back. He's finally decided maybe he should move... Meanwhile we're figuring out if there's a way to move air through the crawl space to outside that his landlord won't go ballistic over.

I used to get horribly congested visiting my SO's parents' house. On examination, a carpet had a 5 foot circle of black mold hiding invisibly on the reverse side. Ripped that sucker up & took it to the dump. Presto, changeo, no more problems.

I'm not sure where you live. If you live in a wooden house with any leaks, one with wall-to-wall carpeting over a source of moisture, an earthen floor in the crawl space or basement, or places where water has gotten behind the wallpaper, you could have monster molds (or mold monsters?) shedding intensely allergenic crud.

In any case, get better soon and have a long productive spell (both writing and at work) with less stress!

ancient
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: May 27 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

<Geordie>
10 days later, and we return to the house to find out whether Shay and Vel's medical and technological problems are are thing of the past or whether fate is still conspiring to prevent all writing on their works of fiction...</voiceover>
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 04 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Well, I know the two of them are alive, based on an email exchange with Shay over a technical issue. He did say that he'd update the forum soon, but, this daily update thing doesn't appear to have been an entirely successful initiative Confused
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 04 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

awkward42 wrote:
Well, I know the two of them are alive, based on an email exchange with Shay over a technical issue. He did say that he'd update the forum soon, but, this daily update thing doesn't appear to have been an entirely successful initiative Confused


Infinite.times {Head->impact(wall)}

Actually, it was wildly successful... while I had time. The last month, though... time? What's that?

I've worked past 9 at least one day every week in the last month. Don't get me wrong; I'm *loving* what I'm doing, and it's important -- as in, success or failure could make a *large* (as in, multiples of my annual salary large) difference in how much we have to spend this year alone, but it means that I come home wiped. I haven't been sleeping all that well, either, because my mind doesn't want to stop working on things....

I'd planned on getting some writing done last weekend, but that was blocked thanks to a case of food poisoning (probably mild, technically, but the headache certainly wasn't). It was my own fault -- I saw a cockroach in the place, but it was 10:30 at night, I'd just gotten out of the office, and I hadn't eaten since 1, so I wasn't at my best....

No, crap. That was weekend before last... I think? Yeah. Last weekend was catching up on sleep and fixing the ceiling so that later this month I can add insulation.

Sheesh. See what I mean? I'm still not sure where May went... I should have seen it going by, shouldn't I?

Anyway... Next Jason and Kylie will go up for beta this weekend *probably*; the one question is whether I manage to finish the ceiling (I've got one 2x2' square to patch) without messing up my hand/wrist (I managed to *bruise* the pad of muscle at the base of my thumb cutting sheetrock on monday, and my wrist wasn't happy even without that, so I'm going to try to get Vel to do the cutting this weekend if she's at all up for it).

After the next Jason and Kylie is a NIS short story that's been eating my brain, which is... not a particularly happy story, and probably a tragedy.

I've got another one I'm working on, sort of, although it hasn't eaten by brain yet... it's rather different; the codes would include 'herm' and, possibly, 'tg', as the main character gains the ability to switch genders at will -- but the price is that she can only stay in a male or female form for a total of six hours a day each. The rest of the time, she's in an in-between state. (I say 'possibly' tg because she doesn't consider herself transgendered, and still thinks of herself as female even when in her male form).

I've always been irritated by gender-swap stories; almost all of them either a) have the character instantly change orientations so that they're 'straight', b) have a great deal of angst, or c) both of the above. I have yet to see a story where the character would react the way I would -- 'Huh. Interesting. Well, time to get ready for work.'

(Have I posted about this one before?)

Shalon Wood
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 04 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Cheers for the update!

I'll start re-reading Jason and Kylie then as I'm not getting into HP Fic 1 for some reason. You've not posted about that tg story before, at least that I can remember. It sounds intriguing.

This weekend is the annual beach party (=alcohol + bbq + massive bonfire on Swansea beach) with my old university mates, so quite how much reading I'll get done I don't know.

As for headaches, I can sympathise as my hayfever has just hit with a blast today. Why does grass need to pollinate anyway? Sad
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: January 13 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

The Wanderer wrote:

This has been niggling at me off and on since it was posted. If her levels were that low despite taking 2,000 units a day, is it possible that she has some kind of difficulty in uptake - that what she's taking isn't being absorbed or processed properly, for some reason?

Because if that's the case, then I wouldn't necessarily expect taking the additional supplements to help; I wouldn't even be surprised if oversaturation could actually make the root problem worse.

I'm hoping that I'm wrong, that the extra supplements are the needed fix and that things are getting better (all else being equal, which in your lives it rarely seems to be); it's been far too long since we've heard one word from her, and I'd like to have her able to be back around here again.


We actually suspect that it's either that or (equally likely, I think) it's a side effect of one of the meds she takes flushing it out faster. Taking the supplements _does_ help, but over the last year or so she's had to avoid too much sunlight because it makes her break out. Talk about your catch-22 situations.....
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 06 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Jason and Kylie chapter 22 just went up for beta. It's a bit short, only 1700 words or so, but it was such a *perfect* ending point that I couldn't bring myself to keep going.

Shalon Wood
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 08 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Ok, I've read through the entire story, including the new chapter, and left comments on most of them. I'll probably re-read the latest chapter again later today/tomorrow. I agree about the ending point btw.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 09 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

The tg story sounds interesting. Looking forward to J&K. Hoping there's a real meal soon.

And hoping Vel gets better soon as I'm missing Prudence updates.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 10 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

I could make several comments relating to meals, but I don't want to leave any spoilers around. I've just read it a second time and not felt the need to leave any more comments, but so far it appears that I'm the only beta to have read it, so I dunno how much longer Shay will want to wait before publishing.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 10 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Too long.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
The Wanderer



Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 93
Location: Maryland

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 10 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

You aren't the only beta to have read it; I got to it probably before you did (certainly before you started running through the earlier chapters with new comments), I just didn't spot anything which seemed to need correction. (Yes, nitpicker though I am, that does happen occasionally.)
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 10 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Fair enough, although I am surprised Very Happy
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
Steveh111



Joined: 20 Feb 2006
Posts: 184

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 13 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

I read it too, and couldn't find fault.

Post it, Shay. Very Happy
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website AIM Address Yahoo Messenger
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 18 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Almost two weeks since the chapter went up for beta, and not a peep out of Shay since?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 22 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

awkward42 wrote:
Almost two weeks since the chapter went up for beta, and not a peep out of Shay since?

He's sick and/or having computer problems, I bet. Or the A/C flaked out.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 23 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

ronp wrote:
awkward42 wrote:
Almost two weeks since the chapter went up for beta, and not a peep out of Shay since?

He's sick and/or having computer problems, I bet. Or the A/C flaked out.


No, actually, I've been insanely swamped at work -- we're getting ready to roll out a new storage array (well, technically, we _have_ rolled out a new storage array), and it's been bad enough that...um... tuesday before last? The one before that? Anyway, I realized that I hadn't eaten anything substantial in over 36 hours....

I'm waking up multiple times in the middle of the night with thoughts about what I'm working on. Wouldn't be so bad if I could _remember_ them in the morning....

Don't get me wrong, I _love_ what I'm doing, but by the time I get home I'm utterly wiped out. I'm actually thinking about taking Friday off, because I need a break, and I think we're at the point where I _can_. Especially since I'm on-call over the fourth. If I do, I'll get this chapter of Jason and Kylie out then (barring being unable to do so, since I'll be out of town at Vel's folks, but I should be able to).
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 29 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Okay, I didn't manage to get it done this weekend, but it's up now!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
ronp



Joined: 08 Apr 2006
Posts: 121

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: June 29 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Might want to put it in the news.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: July 16 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

A few weeks on from the posting, and I know you're alive due a couple of comments on one of the mailing lists, but how is life treating you otherwise?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: July 20 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

awkward42 wrote:
A few weeks on from the posting, and I know you're alive due a couple of comments on one of the mailing lists, but how is life treating you otherwise?


Not horribly. I've discovered that my exhaustion is only partly due to work, which is good; I just wish I'd realized I needed to go see my doctor to get something for my asthma a month ago, if not longer. I hadn't realized how much trouble I was having breathing until a little over a week ago, when it got bad enough that I noticed -- then I realized it'd been a problem for at least a month and a half, but had crept up on me slowly and I hadn't recognized it.

I've got a little bit on another HP one-shot; it's the ultimate over-powered super-Harry (albeit, that's in large part because of the organization he has behind him; he's _personally_ only mostly over-powered). I couldn't resist.

Here's a teaser. A cookie for anyone who recognizes the crossover from this (and there _is_ enough information to do so -- pay attention to his description):

Quote:
Hermione watched in horror as Voldemort, having led his Death Eaters into the castle via a secret passageway in the Chamber of Secrets, laughe\
d.

"Where is your Boy-Who-Lived now, Dumbledore?" he asked mockingly, waving a hand at the empty space which only moments before had been occupie\
d by Harry Potter. "I'll tell you where he is -- gone! Gone forever, to another world, one in which he will live, unharmed -- making me _IMMOR\
TAL!_"

"There are worse things than death, Tom," Dumbledore said, a tear trickling down his cheek.

Voldemort sneered. "Even if that were true, the prophecy said that only your precious pet could 'vanquish' me --"

He broke off in surprise, as... something... began to emerge from nowhere in the middle of the hall. It grew more and more defined, and larger\
, as if it were approaching from a great distance, and then, all at once, a man stood in the center of the hall.

The stranger was six feet tall, with dark hair, bronzed skin, and rugged features, dressed in a simple grey leather uniform, a pair of oddly s\
haped pistols in holsters on his hips. Hermione was wondering who it could be, and how he could have gotten there, when he turned. It took onl\
y a glimpse for her to know who he was.

Harry Potter.

But it wasn't the scar that gave his identity away... it was the {REDACTED}.

Hermione collapsed onto the floor, gasping in disbelief. It wasn't possible... but the proof was standing in front of her.


The bit I redacted would utterly and completely give it away -- I'll just note that it's a) something Harry got while he was gone, and b) Something which conclusively identifies him for anyone who sees it.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
The Wanderer



Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 93
Location: Maryland

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: July 20 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

It's fairly obvious, really, at least if you know the source material well enough.

Though the question then is, just when in the timeline of the other source did Harry just come back from?

(Also, I'll note that Voldemort's description of the prophecy isn't quite accurate, though his interpretation of its consequences - if prophecy is to be taken as prescriptive rather than merely descriptive - probably is.)


Last edited by The Wanderer on July 20 2010; edited 1 time in total
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: July 20 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

The Wanderer wrote:
It's fairly obvious, really, at least if you know the source material well enough.

Though the question then is, just when in the timeline of the other source did Harry just come back from?

(Also, I'll note that Voldemort's description of the prophecy isn't quite accurate, though his interpretation of its consequences - if prophecy is to be taken as prescriptive rather than merely descriptive - probably is.)


Let's just say he was adopted by four red-headed girls who were not quite teenagers when he arrived -- and that they're free to travel now.

Voldemort and Dumbledore _both_ should be grateful that he managed to convince them not to come and... be politely expressive about their opinions on certain matters.

Harry's rather politely expressive himself; he compares Voldemort's competence unfavorable to some of the villains of the source material -- and not the upper echelon. Or their seconds. Or the level below that. _OR_ the level below _that_.

He gets to monologue all he wants, because, well... look. Even an _ordinary_ member of his organization wouldn't have much trouble with the Death Eaters, if he knew what he was facing, and he's not ordinary -- he's one of a group of six counting himself (but not, of course, the girls or their brother -- they're on a different level entirely).

And he's going to recruit Hermione -- and then they're going to expand into their universe. Consider for a moment what that means for the ministry of magic... by definition, Harry's incorruptible. And far too powerful to attack directly. And Occlumency isn't going to help them hide their plans to attack indirectly.... Not to mention the backup he can call on.

See what I mean about the ultimate over-powered super-Harry?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
The Wanderer



Joined: 16 May 2006
Posts: 93
Location: Maryland

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: July 20 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Well... not really, but that's at least in part because A: I tend to be very careful about using terms like "ultimate", and B: I sort of specialize in overpowered super-whatevers. (I actually have a beginning, in the back of my head, which would eventually - and at least somewhat naturally - develop into Harry having direct control over all magic.)

Beyond that, while the organization in question certainly has advantages and capabilities well beyond those of the wizarding world, many of them tend to operate on much more of a macro-scale, and they also have their limitations - and there are things the wizards can do which those of that organization can't, and some of those things might well be able to fit right in through some of the cracks in the metaphorical armor.

I do think that an "ordinary member", as you put it, might indeed have considerable trouble with the Death Eaters even knowing what they were up against, and depending on how certain things are interpreted, even the advanced special members might have serious trouble if they didn't know what they were up against. (For one thing, as far as I recall their quasi-innate abilities don't provide much if anything in the way of physical protectoin...)

I also have a certain amount of trouble with the "expansionist" notion; I don't know offhand exactly why (it's been far too long since I spent much time with that source material), but for some reason it just strikes me as out of character for them, either individually or as their larger organization.

Yes, Harry with that backing would indeed be able to overwhelm any and all opposition he might face from within either the wizarding or Muggle worlds, but it wouldn't necessarily be as one-sided or as clear-cut as I think you're making it out to be.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
 
awkward42



Joined: 20 Aug 2006
Posts: 137
Location: UK

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: July 20 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

Good to have an update, but I'm obviously not familiar with your source material as virtually nothing you two have said has made any sense whatsoever!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: July 20 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

awkward42 wrote:
Good to have an update, but I'm obviously not familiar with your source material as virtually nothing you two have said has made any sense whatsoever!


It's Doc Smith's _Lensman_ series. To give you an idea of how high the stakes got at the end, the next-to-highest level of bad-guys got a planet slammed into theirs -- one which was moving at approximately ten times the speed of light. And because the good guys weren't sure that would be enough, there was a second one directed at the bad guy's _sun_.

The top level of bad guys got hit by a mental blast generated by (if my math is right) a bare minimum six hundred trillion powerful telepaths. That assumes a lensman only has an average of a ten-year lifespan after getting their lens; it's probably more like triple or quadruple that, so 1.8 to 2.4 _quadrillion_ telepaths....

And it wasn't a hundred percent assured that that would be enough.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
 
dstar



Joined: 05 Aug 2003
Posts: 508

PostPost subject: Re: Writing progress    Posted: July 20 2010 Reply to topic Reply with quote Mark post as unread

The Wanderer wrote:

I also have a certain amount of trouble with the "expansionist" notion; I don't know offhand exactly why (it's been far too long since I spent much time with that source material), but for some reason it just strikes me as out of character for them, either individually or as their larger organization.

Yes, Harry with that backing would indeed be able to overwhelm any and all opposition he might face from within either the wizarding or Muggle worlds, but it wouldn't necessarily be as one-sided or as clear-cut as I think you're making it out to be.


Well, the last bit is because I left something out, now that I look back at my post. Harry doesn't need a wand anymore -- he has something better. His Lens.

And while he's by *no means* a Third-Stage Lensman, he *is* a Second-Stage Lensman -- and one of the things he wanted was better control over his magic. (He also went for a sense of perception, and a variation on Worsel's trick -- he can't actually compartmentalize his mind, but he can do a large number of essentially identical things, and one or two things that aren't. Such as immobilize all the Death Eaters while still carrying on a conversation).

Consider for a moment the ramifications of being taught to truly master his magic by Mentor, of all beings. Even if Mentor had no knowledge of magic when Harry arrived (a highly dubious proposition, given that Harry's magic did work there), he would very shortly be better versed in it than anyone from the wizarding world.

And the Patrol is expanding into Harry's universe because Harry asked them to; his view of the wizarding world is that it's remarkably like Boskone, only without the redeeming values. (For example, the stunt Kinnison pulled after taking Boskone, where he gave the former leaders complete information on what it would be like to work _for_ Civilization, and a choice as to which they'd personally enjoy more, would be wasted effort on most of the members of the MoM, in his opinion. And the rest wouldn't need it.)

You're right about ordinary members having a problem, though -- I forgot that taking control of someone was a Second-Stage trick.

On the gripping hand, he still has the Children of the Lens backing him up. The girls especially aren't so much a thought away as they are waiting for Harry to stop insisting on doing it on his own.... (Despite the fact that they're technically _younger_ than Harry, he's their baby brother as far as they're concerned, and they're... very protective.)
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
Display posts from previous:   
Post new topic    Pele's Playground Forum Index -> General Forum

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum


Powered by phpBB © 2001 phpBB Group